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winter theme -gamemusicattempt

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this is my first and a brief attempt at making game music. I didn't work on it for long, but I'm uploading it now because I feel lost and I hope to get an imput on what to do.
couldn't get the melody right and I'm not sure what's missing...

please help me. give me suggestions and recomendations on how to do good game music=)

love// Jessiejoystick<3


It's not bad at all.

First off, Generally, Video Game songs are loops, or have a new track cut them off. This isn't the case in this song, because it fades out instead of an abrupt ending. Just a suggestion, not saying I haven't seen fantastic songs fade out but yeah, it is just a suggestion.

Secondly, I could tell that the bass and the drums were a continuous loop which kind of annoyed me, nevertheless it could be changed to a longer loop with more variation and be a little more pleasing. :D

Thirdly, In the beginning, this is just my opinion, after it kicks off, the note starts a little to low. What can be done to improve it is after the very biginning, you could have the notes a tad louder and a bit higher-pitched like the notes in the middle of the song.

Lastly, When I hear this song, I think of Castle Crashers, if you haven't seen or played it it's an... action game you fight people in :D, but yeah, if this song was in there I would be disappointed because there's hardly any action in this. It's just the same thing over and over with a little different notes here and there.

P.S. The background bass guitar or w/e the hell it's called, shouldn't be the same notes over and over.

4/5 for being Video Game Song and I don't know what game it would be for.
7/10 for the 5 reasons stated above.

jessiejoystick responds:

thank you for helping me. I'll sertenly reflect over your suggestions the next time I try to make game music =D

I appriciate it a lot ;)

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3.69 / 5.00

Jun 10, 2010
12:07 PM EDT
Video Game
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4.2 MB
1 min 51 sec

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