it sounds liek you were somewhat influenced by the song "in a dream" that came out in like.. 1998.. cuz I can actualyl sing that song along with this heheh..
it's not bad.. but it does sound a bit presettish.. did you use fl studio to make this..?
the lead sounds a bit.. lost.. note wise.. lacks cohesion imo.
I dunno.. I just don't feel it's doing much for me sorry :(
In my dreamz
Not bad. I like your melodies. The drums could use some work, reinforce some of the notes with cymbal shots or something. Also, adding another part will make it a much more complete song.
Thank you!!! :D I will work on it more, this one took 30 mins to make.