Lay off the riffs a little and work on original drum lines and leads, you'll be surprised how much better you'll become. That and you should play with some FX also, notably Delay 2, Fast Distortion, and Filter.
Aside from that, this song is in alright shape, you seem to know what you're doing with these and have the potential to get good pretty quickly. But that only comes with originality! ;)
As always, keep em' coming!
hehe alright ! ill do my best ..im just not a pro yet in fruity loops
Simply loved it.....Keep up the outstanding work
:D thanx man!