I can feel this painted picture.
Ashes to ashes.
Dust to dust.
We must save our asses.
From these people who lust.
For our own sake.
For our own sweat.
Give nothing to take.
Naught for regret.
For they will find you.
They will fly down.
Killing you all.
Destroying this town.
This town that once was.
This town that once strived.
See what this government does.
To keep yourself alive.
__________________O Very nice. You even extended on my poem. I forgot about that poem.
Glad you liked it. :3
Keep making songs dont look back
Your music ive never seen any real music star compose keep up the good work . And I hope all of my reviews boost your cofidence to make even better songs than ever nice song bro .
Thankyou . I worked really hard on this one . Themusic I compose isn't just music .. It's a world I present you through the echoes of my soul . I love to hear sounds, and paint pictures with sound . Heh . Thankyou for another awesome review bro . ^_^ I will keep making music for you to review hahah =P
A depressive reality
And sadly, on the newscasts everyday. Musically, I can always count on your avant-garde/abstract style, while this piece in particular holds a lot of meaning.
One suggestion: submit something without putting a detailed description. Let's see how people will react ;)
Aww, but stories are awesome >: Music isn't that good, unless you display what you saw, then when people listen to it their mind makes them see the alternatives, as such . ^^ . Thankyou for the review =P .
- Aphotic Athanasy -
Ashes // creating a concentrated testimony, and because it's short it's almost like a memory of he past( or vision of the future ), bits and pieces are missing ( only because they are not important ) and youre left with the parts that matter.
On the musical side of things, this would work well as a incidental score for a film.
Why thankyou . ^_^ Yea, it is short, and yes it was that of visions and whatnot when I imagined it, I wasn't going to add footsteps, and the helicopter taking a minute to land . LOL
- Aphotic Athanasy - (Going to bed for the night guys, goodnight ^^)
i like your views on such things, kind of morbid i suppose.anyways love the song very interesting.
Thankyou, also . I would be counted morbid, if I ignored what this world goes through everyday while 90% of us humans enjoy the good life, buying extravagant items, houses, even time .. I also, would be anti-morbid. I really don't like the news, it's trash and it's pointless . We already know these things go on in life, so why do people want to watch it ? It's already annoying knowing that people just swarm in wanting to get the ''scoop'' on injured humans, and don't show any sympathy . This world is morbid through us humans . If you actually look passed reality's curtains, you will see the flames I see.. It's already hard enough to wake up everyday hearing this world's pain, and cries it makes in it's incoherent whispers .. Thankyou for the review . ^^
- Aphotic Athanasy -
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.