Its fine as it is
no need to ruin it simpleness
It's actually a really awesome track, but like AngelofPeace said, it needs to be louder, longer, and have some variation, like a key-change or something. Other than that, it was a really cool, rock tune.
For not even trying it's pretty good.
just make it a little louder and add some variation.
That's one way of looking at it thanks :) I guess it could be louder
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.