cool

I liked how the sound is clashing but has the background chords come back in to give it some light. It shows a contrast that would be great for a game. Makes me think of a game like bejeweled. Cool

Good Ideas, Not So Great Execution

I like what this was going for, but it needs a bit of work. The first thing thats apparent off the bat is that it needs a better mix. The pad was way too overpowering. The piano that came in was as well. It drowns out whats happening in the background.

The other thing I noticed that was a bit off were the pitches. Some of the notes you used seemed a little off compared to the chord progression you were using. A little detuned feeling, which gives it a werid ambiance but at some points was a bit too off for me to like it.

Good Job though, I'd like to hear a reworking of this.