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Jun 7, 2010 | 11:45 PM EDT
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2.3 MB
2 min 32 sec
3.16 / 5.00

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Rated 3.16 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

The beat is from necro.
im trying a new flow

Emo kids are quick to slit there wrist
im quick to grab the ice pick
And stab you with it
Right in the neck
a couple more times
to make sure your dead
Try to speak
but bitch i dont hear whats said
cause to much red is pourin out your moth an head
Now its the end
just to make sure
I stab you in your throat
no gag reflex
you didnt throw up
i feel your skin
its much colder
your lips are blue
Bury you in the back yard
yea hes ready to meeet YOU!!
shit you turned inot a ghost
That means your the wrong person
I upset the balance now ill have to hear it
Who are you

im the reaper
the deceiver
turn off your receiver
unless you wanna hear me clearer
evp's ill talk to you
not really you ask questions i lie to you
you cinfide in me
you think im a relative
Now you see why people dont perform seances
Blow out the candle lights!
now your terrified
Ask the undertaker, i gave him his last ride
now hes in a tombstone
Thats all ironic
cause they were all hes signature moves
Now back to you
Death is art
you can come up with millions of ways
Its beautiful, you feel it in your heart
Not really its cold and degrading
Cause i go that extra wave length
How do you wanna die?
ill give you some ideas
we can cremate yea
break each of your bones at eat ya
we can.
Chain you to a car
have a minion hold your head
so you scrap against the cement
your brains are leaving
Bodily fluids are leakin
Your weeping
so i guess thats to much
How about this
i give you a hug
pull out a 12 inch blade and stab you in the gut
death doesnt like pussy's
So i take my anger out on you
stabbing and stabbing
Pull out your stomach, and drain you in the acid
Make you taste your own juice
you hate it, I love it.
Your scared, i want it
death is exciting
Especially when i get to sign your name in writing
that means your dead
and i get to pick
Weather you r
in hell or heaven
I bet your regretting
ever letting
me int your realm
Now just follow me as i take you down to HELL



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

not bad

-It's raw, less raw than most tho.
-Vocal rhythms aren't quite on
-The supporting vocal is pretty good but take the volume down
-One point someone spiked the mic, I think that you could do the blowing thing without spiking it.
-Lyrics are pretty good just work on the rhythm and articulating more with the rapping.
-Idk if you wanted the vocals at the end to be off pitch. Its interesting but its a little pitchy.

That being said, it's a pretty good track. The background track is sick. You could probably work on some form make a hook or something and make it more formal in the formatting. It has a lot of potential to be wicked. Just like I said before the biggest thing that would help is articulating better on your rhythms while rapping, especially on the consonants.