Nothing wrong with that of course, just kind of weird. This song, I thought, had some good aspects as well as some aspects in need of improvement.
Firstly, the song jumps right into a loud part with many effects going on. There wasn't any build to it since it was already about as interesting then at as it was ever going to get. It's like a book that begins at its climax, so there's nowhere for the excitement level to go but down. I did like how it toned down so it could be allowed to build back up at some point though. What really bothered me about this was that there was no beat in the background, so at parts of the song it was hard to tell what exactly was going on. Beats of some sort would have also been a nice way to add a forward motion and to keep interest.
I did like the effects you used though. They worked well together and sounded pretty cool to me. And you did have some beats in the beginning which I thought added to it as well. The middle part, though rather boring, was a nice trnasition to the end part. I really liked the change from minor to major because it was unexpected, but it worked. And the very end sounded kinda funky, but that's why I liked it.
Overall I would suggest working with beat effect and have more of a build at the beginning.
Thanks bro but im maybe not going to work on it, dont have much time on my hands. I know how it just jumps on in which really bothers me but i thought this entire song was going to fail so, thought i had to post something and well this appeared