This song makes me have to turn my head to the right.
So, yeah, Stereo problems, but other than that it's pretty good.
A fairly decent submission.
This is quite frankly a very unbalanced song - in terms of volume.
It seems you've either doubled your notes at 0:16-0:26, or you have the worst live-production I've heard in quite a while.
Either way, it doesn't really strike me as a good way of creating dynamics.
In addition, there's a clear lack of instrumentation - as you only have the one synth and some perc.
What I would do to it is to add depth by adding more instruments, let's say - a bass melody and a lead -- in addition, I'd perhaps modulate (change scales mid-song) for more versatility.
You also might want to create a more driving feel - by adding more percussion that plays basically at every beat - but in varied velocity - so that you can mark the places you want emphasized using the velocity changes.
Send me a message or something if you have any questions, or hatemail - if you thoroughly disagree : )
Thanks that would be awesome :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.