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I love soundtracks from epic movies of any genres, so this track, which is still work in progress is heavily influenced by that. I'm going to add more and more samples into this and make the track biger and cool.

<<I'm a big newbie in this, so If anybody woulda like to help me with this track, or even collab with me, pls let me know and I would be happy to learn new things :) >>


This song makes me have to turn my head to the right.
So, yeah, Stereo problems, but other than that it's pretty good.

A fairly decent submission.

This is quite frankly a very unbalanced song - in terms of volume.
It seems you've either doubled your notes at 0:16-0:26, or you have the worst live-production I've heard in quite a while.
Either way, it doesn't really strike me as a good way of creating dynamics.
In addition, there's a clear lack of instrumentation - as you only have the one synth and some perc.
What I would do to it is to add depth by adding more instruments, let's say - a bass melody and a lead -- in addition, I'd perhaps modulate (change scales mid-song) for more versatility.

You also might want to create a more driving feel - by adding more percussion that plays basically at every beat - but in varied velocity - so that you can mark the places you want emphasized using the velocity changes.

Send me a message or something if you have any questions, or hatemail - if you thoroughly disagree : )

-Christian Sandviknes

Deshiel responds:

Thanks that would be awesome :)

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4.12 / 5.00

Jun 6, 2010
6:17 AM EDT
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901.3 KB
39 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.