I think the intro, 1:25 section are the strongest. Pretty cool choir in the background. At a time, I felt harmonic rifts between the melody and the background- but that added to the feeling of the song and "worked." Really strong- but I'd end more dramatically then a fade out- perhaps a huge build and smash sort of finale.
it's nice, but the drums hit me a little blunt. in fact the whole track feels like it's missing a little bit of texture. I mean all the pieces are there, the bass, the drums, the lead, even a little choir sounding thing in the back. It feels like it needs a better change of pace. The more I listen to it though, the more i like it.
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