sounds like something from a video game...
i understand that your trying to do something unique and original,though that there is hip hop in the song but i don't hear anything much "industrial" about it except for the drums...
though i feel like that its something you'd hear from a video game on the the SEGA genesis,like in some drugish hallucination level in some game,but not exactly toejam and earl.
3/5
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