THIS IS MY FIRST DRAFT. I think this song has a lot of potential and could really use some feedback. Please review so I can perfect this song. Thanks!
EDIT: The final version can be found via my page! Please check that out as well. Someone already zero-bombed it and I'm going to need all the voting support I can get. Thanks!
Pretty good.
I actually like this song, it's calming, yet captivating.
Theres just a bit of roughness that comes out, I know it's part of the instrument, but it comes off as possible bad quality, Just smooth out that on instrument a bit, (The exact problem is it sounds raspy)
But other than that, very well done!
Yeah its pretty chalked up with distortion. I was to keep that harsh sound but I need to find a way to bring it down a little bit. Thanks for the advice! I'll be editing my instruments for next time.
good
Nice, but use more drum loops and breaks and crashes ;)
Thanks for the advice! I will make sure to add some more variety in my drums for my next revision.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
sonicExplorer 
