Holy buttsecks, this is awesome!
The monotonous feel, I love it
Author Comments
Hello everyone, I present you a song that I worked really hard on . It's my first song, so don't be so technical and harsh about it . I only been on this program for 12 days now, so I have alot of room to improve .
- Fire's Depths Brings Forth The Real Face-
It's easy to understand once you think about it, it represents the fact that humans before us who are actually machines become their true selves when they are embodied by flames.. Like the Terminator for a cheesy example . I hope you like it =D I spent like 1.5 hours on this one .
Edit: Sadly, it's very pathetic to see my hardwork go to the waste in an essence form, when nobody even has the slightest time to atleast TELL ME what I did wrong, that SUPPOSELY made them not like it, WAIT let me guess, is it because it's industrial ? One of the most places that get 0 bombed for NO apparent reason . Seriously, these people need to get a real life, and stop patronizing people's soul carressing work, they created - ....... -
AphoticAthanasy responds:
This was my second song WAY in the beginning of my time in composing . I believe I made this on my 13th day ? Awesome song, I agree . It was for the Robot Comps, back in May 2010 . Those days were fun . ^-^ . Thanks for the review . ^-^ .
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Pretty neat
This also works for a robot theme. It didn't really have that cool feeling that your other songs had though, like the surreal sounding basslines. I think it sounds kinda like a malfunctioning machine, but it isn't completely haywire. Damn, I wish I could do some music for Robot day, but I don't feel quite inspired. BTW, alot of people don't like industrial music because they don't hear the melodies and grooves in the glitchy factory like sounds, and the only industrial they do like are usually stupid electric guitars and hammer drums.
AphoticAthanasy responds:
Lol, thanks . You do know..This is my FIRST song . Right ? =P Seriously, my 1st song that started the rest of the songs . XD I still love this one, =P .
Thanks for the review bro .
- Aphotic Athanasy -
Ehh
A bunch of shit going on that clashes with the other shit going on. Not much more to say, however, you're probably going to give me a long, wordy response telling me why my review was "wrong" and "useless" instead of taking any of the criticism you get and using that to improve your songs.
AphoticAthanasy responds:
Actually, nah, I understand exactly what you mean, this is nowhere near what the other guy implyed which was utterly pointless .. (It's not even a song) <-- You cannot tell me his review was ''helpful'' (So..How do you expect me to improve with such a jaded notion ? ) . Anyways, it's the past, I explained to him why I said what I said, it's done now . Now for your good review, I understand what you are saying, but you also have to take into account I mashed it up to make it sound authentic . So yes it sounded like it is low quality with the instruments not working together, but if you actually visualize the body flames, and see what I want you to see, it becomes exactly what I composed this song for in the first place . Thankyou for the review, good sir .
- Aphotic Athanasy -
So far...
So far, out of all the submissions I've heard, this embodies the contest the best. It's great avant garde-ish bleeps and noise and industrial whirrs that truly sound like robots. Great sound design work here. 10/10, 5/5.
AphoticAthanasy responds:
Thankyou for being someone who understands the essence of music, and the creation of this particular song . I humbly await any of your reviews down the road .
Goodluck to you, ^^ .
- Aphotic Athanasy -
I see robots working in an assembly line.
The tune was good for a background sound of possible robot ambiance, but otherwise it wasn't really a song. I like it though, eerie dark factory style. And here, everyone gets 0 bombed. Not just your song.
AphoticAthanasy responds:
Define ''Song'' . A structure of leads ? Listen, you really can't even define a ''song'' .. It just matters what it makes you see, and if its able to be listenable, while it carresses your soul, with it's incoherent whispers . Humans these days .. Have no sense of gratification through their poor judgement .
Music, is basically a story, told by our hearts .. Nothing more .. Just like everyone in this world in general, never happy with what they have .. - ... -
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3.30 / 5.00
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- Jun 4, 2010
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- 1.6 MB
- 1 min 48 sec
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