Not bad beginner stuff here.
Could always work on your mixdown methods, such as compression & limiting.
Not a bad piece of work here though.
Seems like its one lead doing most of the work though.
You need to explore some new percussions etc etc.
anyhow decent job.
Return the favor sometime
Thx 4 the review. yea i was messin around & it just ended up being the same lead. I havent really put much time into this. But ya ill totally look at your work