I discovered this to be awesome
Great piece! Its not only odd, but funny and happy, I like it. I could imagine this to be a full length song, its a bit intense to be such a short loop. Reminds me of Eminem, by the way. Guess you know which song I mean.
Actually, i don't know which song you mean. I don't listen to Eminem much :p
But thanks for the review! I think i'll never make this a full length song though. Sorry :(
Does what you went out to acomplish
You wanted funny and odd- and it succeeds fairly well. I personally disagree with gravey- the flute, while nothing amazing, seems to fit the song. It's quirky, it wouldn't be out of place in some quirky flash animation- and the rest of the song is similar. The song has a sense of urgency about it that I enjoy.
Is it a musical masterpiece that will be handed down the ages? Probably not. But it is perfectly odd, and that being your goal, you succeeded.
I agree with your review :p
Very nice! The tune is very catchy. In my opinion, if this were to be used in a flash movie, it would best work in an environment where a character is traversing down long and dark castle passageways in an effort to escape someone (or something) or chase after said someone/something. The sound quality came out great, and every sound came out brilliantly, no one instrument was overpowering, they all came together seamlessly. I could definetly learn a thing or two from you. :)
And i love your idea about that flash movie :)
There isn't much to say really. To be honest it's rather dull and unexciting. There just isn't much here. It's short, and doesn't have any sort of logical structure. Not trying to be negative or anything, but this just doesn't seem like you spent a whole lot of time on it.
The flute is pretty drab. I think you could do a lot more with it. It's melody lines are pretty uncontrolled and just sort of out of place. I think if you layered it and varied the types of attacks used with the flute it would be better.
I do like the pizzicato strings in the background. They have a nice tone to them, and really set the mood well.
4/5 and 6/10 overall. It's not bad, but definitely not one of your better submissions.
Well, you are right, i didn't spend much time on this.
But about the melody.. i actually the melody :p
Anyway, thanks for the advice and the review! :)
I would like to see what sort of animation someone could fit to this. It makes me think of a rushed apprehensive curiosity in the beginning. Then around 35 seconds in it gives into a less rushed feeling. In the end it gives off the feeling of an impending climax.
Overall I think it is great.
Yeah, i'd like to see this in an animation too :p
Thank you for this review and i'm glad you liked it! :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.