This flows very well and has a very wonderful warm tone to it. I'm listening to this on my Altec Lansing speaker system and it sounds amazing to say the least. The mix is superb from what I can hear, but then again I'm not listening to this with phones. So it might be a bit biased on my system.
I really like the composition, despite the fact it isn't exactly mainstream in design. You vary the sound just enough to keep things interesting, and the overall ensemble fits the tone and mood of the song structure wonderfully.
Despite all of that there is just a little something lacking. I'm not sure exactly, but this isn't one of those pieces that just fascinates me. Do not get me wrong, it is a solid composition. Just seems it could use a little more love and tender care in my opinion. It's almost there, just not quite for me yet.
5/5 and 9/10 overall. Nice composition my friend.