Eternity and infinite are the same thing. The title of this song is like saying,"Not just honorable, but respectable," or,"Not just your ABC's, but your Alphabet," OR,"Not just the start, but the beginning." I'm not hating, I'm just saying. o-o
Good start! needs work.
To get over that thought that you are streaching the piece beyond what it should be, you should try jumping keys, more general variety. I think the piece could have used a little better bridges between its sections as well.
That said, the sound design works very well. The synth sounds and effects work together well to create a pleasing sound, the progression and melody are also pleasing and catchy. The beat is good, but.. and this is just an opinion rather then a criticism.. I think it would sound better with more electronic-sounding drum sounds instead of the acoustic drum samples you are using.
Overall good piece though, keep working!
I gave more synthetic sounding drums a shot. You are pretty right about that, they match better. but a lot of times they replace some drum effect i want with weird little claps and bizarre sounds like that, and that is tedious to work around. but I will probably use them in my next song, thanks for the suggestion.
Yeah, I'd say it feels just a tad bit drawn out, but its not a big deal. You have a really great song going on here. Perhaps find someone to put some vocals over it? This could definitely evolve into a masterful piece with that. As far as it feeling drawn out, I don't think its the actual time, cus 3:32 isn't bad, but it's the fact that most of the song sounds the same. I guess maybe a little more differentiation between the verses and chorus lines would help. Anyway, I think this is pretty haus as is.
The only thing I would recommend is working on tightening up the transitions from the verses into the choruses. I can hear a split second gap in the sound there. Not a big deal, but just wanted to make you aware of it.
Anyway, great job!
i'm aware of it, its because the first transition is supposed to sort of 'trip' into the piano and it does it right, but the ones after that are all messed up.
and you are very right about vocals, i've been thinking of doing vocoding or something, but i'm a bass and my voice is awkward for music like this. if you know anyone interested in collabing and doing vocals for a track or something like that, shoot me a message because that would be beeeeast.
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