THIS SONG IS GREAT I LIKE IT VERY MUCH
bass is too heavy
it distorts and messes up the groove of the song
other than that good job
Definitely impressive for your first song
As previously mentioned though, the middle break down needs some help, if not removed. You drag the chords out for nearly a minute, and fail to really change anything during the entire bit. Then once you reach the second build up at 2:24, you fail to introduce a new line to the melody, making the piece feel to repeated for me. That being said, I truly loved the way you added layers when you did.
Needs some work.
Needs some work done on it.
Agreed. This was my first song I ever made, so it definitely has its flaws. For a first song, though, I'm pretty pleased with the results.
i can picture
this could be in a game i think its great
Thanks :). I've always been a fan of old school and new school video game songs, and they have had a big influence on me.
Keep gaming! :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.