The overall flow doesn't fit together. I can tell like danny said, it's a little amateur. If you fixed a little of the EQ, added more FX, a different type of drum beat, this could really be great. I loved the unique chord progression, it really fits with the rhythm, although there isn't really a melody, but I suppose it doesn't really need one. :D
decent beginner workflow and sound
My review will be biased because its obvious you are semi-new to producing , or maybe just new to this genre in particular.
But anyhow , good idea. I can see where you wanted this to go. However the mixdown needs some work. Overall the sound is not quite at an even DB. These leads are not loud enough. Almost every sound needs level adjustments.
All in all it was a interesting listen, reminds me of my first couple months producing, almost exact same sound lol.
keep learning and producing buddy :]
5.00 / 5.00 (+ 5.00) - my vote.
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Alright man thanks for the review.