Well, it's distinctive, I'll give you that. If this were used as a theme for a group of antagonists it would work pretty well. (I just imagine playing a game, hearing the song and thinking "Oh shit, it's THEM, how am I gonna get out of this alive??")
Anyhow, pretty good just in terms of what it could be used for. (though I suggest adding something else rather than dialogue, since if it's looped background music it might not always work too well, as opposed to a one time song)
Voice isn't perfect. Add some effects.
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