I don't know if the genre is the correct one.
Please give me feedback. I like this song and I want to improve it.
Some ideas to make this song are stolen from the iLife package (bass line, beat).
Made in GarageBand 5.1
Garage, so much fun.
In my opinion, this seems like a vdieogame loop. For like a space game of sorts.
Some parts come in at odd parts, like at 00:48. The beat came in at an awkward time.
At 1:22 you brought in the synth which was a really nice touch. It gave the song a full and more directed feeling.
I loved the bass above all else. Not bad! I enjoyed it. :D
thx for feedback.
I listend 5 times to ~00:48 and I think it would sound odd if the beat would start at 00:48.
I'd improve this song when someone gives me a hint, what I can improve, but at this point I don't agree with you ;-)
EDIT: years later I changed my opition and I want to re-make this song. I agree that some part are terrible.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Bomberzocker 
