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Ok,slow to fast,calm to action .Overall:its ok,but well balanced :)
p.s:somebody vote my songs too!waaghh!they are there for 1 month! :O
Good Melody, Nice Drive.
I'm realling enjoying the opening melody which is acompanied by a build up around the 50 second mark. I think the 1st break comes too early around the 1:00 Minute mark. Bass is nicely Eq'd although Raising the low end up a bit and adding a highend Subbass. Melody which creeps in at 1:45 is rather nice and attractive. In my opinion, pads is the requirement here. Perhaps a fat pad which can later be automated into a high Eq'd pad, to get that Airwave sound. I do believe since it's a demo, it has that ackward sudden stop. Good stuff nonetheless, finish it.
Hey man, i dont know if uve seen me around before, but anyways, i wanna say that this start off very well, but like i think you introduced the bassline to far, you should of brought it right after the silence when the kick comes in, but thats just me.I liked this, it was soothing, trance is not my style, but that doesnt stop me from reviewing and trying to help you out. Its a very soft melody then theres a disturbing synth thats comes on too strong, maybe you should have introduced it smoother? It repeats alot though and ends bad. Anyways, those are the things i disliked...
what i liked, AWESOME choice of instrements, seriously, they all fit together and are well mixed. Thats a hard thing to do saometimes. good structure exept for what i mentioned up top.
Anyways keep it up, for trance id have to say work on NOT introducing instruments suddenly, smooth them in, mostly use fade ins if you know how to use automation, if not then gimme a call and ill help ya out with that
Keep it up, dont take this bad or anything, im doing what every newgrounder should do, constructive criticism.
Wholy cow thanks man. Seriously, I'm taking every word you say in... And to clear up a few confusions, the [final?] part meant that it can and will be worked further if need be... Kinda like a demo, but not really. :)
Once again, thanks alot!