This song is just fantastic. The only complaint about this extended version is it doesn't really have an end. In the shorter version, the end was a nice fade out, but this one just stopped.
Hmm, thanks for pointing that out. I will try making a fadeout here too.
This is one the most chill pieces I've run across. A good depth of notes and rhythms round out the overall sound while simultaneously creating a mesmerizing experience. You've struck a great balance between lively and mellow. This is one I can enjoy attentively or passively.
One suggestion: This piece can get a bit repetitive. The same basic underlying chord progression flows throughout. This is strictly a matter of taste, and the piece is quite legitimate as is. If you want to make it a bit more dynamic, I would suggest that you play around with either a bridge or alternate melody that complements your existing work and has its own unique chord progression; sort of like the chorus-verse thing you find in other music. The key here is changing up the underlying chord progression. Meander a bit, then come back to it... once, twice, however many times suits you. Also, you can do the same or different alternate chord progressions each time. I think you'll find that your masterwork has new heights to soar to, given a bit more attention.
Regardless, this piece is Simply Beautiful.
Thank you, these words are much felt. Thank you for also giving me suggestions on making it better. I will try to go back and give it more attention and i'll try to make it more interesting (less repetative). Another idea i had to make my sound better was to stop one instrument and bring in another in its place and have that for a while and then go back. I always appreciate and love reviews where people tell me how i can become even better and take the music to new hights! (I think if you would listen to the first tune i made in december and compare it with what i have now, i think ther might be a sliiiight differance xD)
Thankyou ^^ Glad you like it.
This Expanded version is a dream come true! Thank you for the amazing music!
Glory to God! I am astonished at your response! Thankyou for the encouraging words. I hope you will be able to relax with this ^^
really love it
it is able to relax me more than just 1 and a half minutes.
It calms me and puts me in a solid state of relaxation that i can not explain it's just so, so awesome I can't believe a huge thumbs up, best ambient track up!!
Whoa! Wasn't excpecting a review like this! I am quite surprised! I'm quite delighted that you could relax to this. ^^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.