I liked the piece very much, it has an overall immersive feel that makes you forget you're listening to a song for a second. A minor complaint is that it's a little bit too loud.
Thanks :D as to it being too loud I realized that after I exported the song and it sounded much different afterwards it, so for now I'm just dealing with it.
As a side note you can turn the volume down ;)
This chord pattern is the most common chord pattern I've found in western music. There are so many examples of this chord pattern, but I'll name you only a few. Escape-Craig Armstrong. Pieces-Sum41. One!-Mr Amazing XS. River Flows in You-Yiruma. One Day-Hans Zimmer. In any case, I won't judge this song based on overuse of the chord pattern as I was once guilty of abusing the same chord patter ;P The melody isn't all that appealing save one part (1:23-1:28). If you can build a whole melody phrase from that and use it effectively, that would be awesome. But remember not to overuse it or it will get boring :P
Honestly the most common chord progression in western music is a 1,4,5,4,1, or some variant of that, replace 4 with 2 or 5 with 6 etc.
not m1, m5, m3 1st inversion, m6, unless you are mistaking the chords for something they're not...
also, the melody at 1:23 is for the most part the same melody at :40 aside from a few quick movements
and lastly, telling me my melody isn't appealing is hardly constructive, just a thought.
Good job dude
You're under judging what a good piece this is. Keep up the work and I can't wait to see what you do later on.
It's like ear sex...
and you, my friend, read the kama sutra...
Bahaha an interesting analogy but thanks nonetheless :)
I. Love. This. Song. The entire tyhing just feels... EPIC. Great job with it, I look forward to future submissions.
Thanks so much :)
I honestly didn't expect it to get such good reviews, and yet here they are :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.