Started really getting into it at 1:20 - very unique combination of sounds here. Maybe rework the intro or make shorter? Also found the pause at 2:36 a little too empty or long. Great ! Don't drop this one!
I liked it a lot. One thing I would change: I would've liked to hear a deep bass (similar to what starts up at around 2:00) earlier on in the song. I think starting at like 1:25 with a couple of change ups in between would be cool. Also the ending bugged me (about 2:58), not because it was bad, but because it nicely set up another whole potential minute of music. You did say this was not the final version though. Keep on this one, there's more awesome potential here.
Review me back if you get a moment and keep on rockin' friend!
wow you've just said exactly what I was going to change, the bass and extend the song I was just eager to put the song on
I'm glad you liked it a lot it motivates me to continue this song
I've made some changes you better check it out, there's still room for improvement so if you have any spare time and you comment on this version it won't be wasted time ;)