this is my jam can I use this
good but needs more
Im a n***a who usually likes bass but u got a lil too much bass in there homie.. u gotta eq dat down a lil bit.. and this song would do great with those "hey!" adlibs thrown 4 beats for every 3rd bar. & like my dawg crysis would say.. "add some bells" this song sounds like it needs em. just speakin my mind. duece
im curious fam. i just got a comment from the one below me and i see that ya both have the eye. Yall represent that stuff? If you know what i mean
My review, your song.
Careful with your mixing.
At 0:25 theres far too much resonance and high freq coming through on the vocaly FX sound, and its rather painful. Lower high freqs with an EQ, limit it, soft clip it, filter it, whatever is necessary to take off the edge. It clips.
With the trance gated synth, make sure the notes its hitting sync in key signature with the backdrop of the song.
The kick-bass-drop sound is EQ'd too loudly and clips. While a heavy kick is certainly desireable in hiphop, to acheive the effect one doesn't just raise its volume until its above everything else. You go through your other tracks/instruments and EQ out the freq range the kick falls under so that when the kick does play, it has no competition in its frequency range, so its heard loud and clear without causing distortion.
Song overall is very repeititve, a simple intro/outro would help.
With a few mixing tweaks this is totally useable for doing some verses on.
good look brotha. most deffinately need tweaking
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.