Almost unworthy of listening.

Probably the only good thing here is that break at 1:08. The rest just sounds awful, seriously. I don't wanna be mean or anything, that is what I honestly think about your song. First, the drums are too loud and they sound like shit. Second, no bass. Why? Third, two guitars should play the whole song, not just that part with intervals at 0:20, it doesn't matter if they are playing the same thing.

P.S.

Thrash metal is boring. I heard all this on Exodus' first album.