Notbad

Well this was notbad it does seem like it could use more polish like the track could have some build up maybe even some fade out on it but overall this was notbad at all but I liked it just needs more energy about it my depth and that's not hard to do it anyways nice job here hope to hear more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added build up

~X~

this is fucking awesome dude

Good playing

But that can only get you so far. Your songwriting could be a lot better, the vocal clip did not fit with the rest of the song, and there was no buildup, nothing to keep you hooked as it goes on. at least the overall skill is better that today's pop music.