pretty decent, even though i don't really like that kind of music. i think it's a bit too repetitive and monotonous so you should try to vary a bit and put a bit give it a more unique feel (good luck with that, lol. can't help you there), maybe try using a free program like anvil studio or audacity to add some effects to the piece. good job though.
-don't mind rockstar596023, he's just a dumbass with a sad life who has nothing else to do than insult people. lol
haha thanks ill try to improve :D lol