Yeah Dude, I can see the metal liquid in this! Very good!
Ok, the two reviews below me didn't actually give any proper criticism, so looks like I have to.
It sounded alright and I can see what you were trying to do. Clean it up a bit and sort out the funny background melody and this could be good.
I agree with kliker...
This is terrible. I'm sorry, but I can't offer anything constructive...
This music sucks. Dont submit crappy music to newgrounds:P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.