A little bland
Could use a much more sophisticated beat than a straight one in the first section.
And the first section seems a little out of touch with the rest of the piece anyways, to be honest I almost didn't manage to listen long enough to reach the more interesting second half of the track. I liked where you were headed with the break down at 36 and 1.16.
It was really repetitive, and lacking any real rhythm. My advice, keep working on your skills. And listen to other peoples music. You want to make something with a high replay value. Good attempt though!