Both the songs you have submitted have been really good, you obviously have some talent. But if you could think of your own melodies and make your songs longer, then I'd give a 10/10 review!
Hey! Cheers for the review. You're right, I'd be better making my own melodies. I do have some ideas it's just I don't know where to put them or what to do with them! ^^
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