SO chilled
dude, got to say, you'v done a good job. I like listening to your track when I do work sometimes, so relaxing. You got the will power man, well done
Author Comments
This song has been through a lot of changes, and I'm still working on vocals for it. This is part of an EP I'm working on over the summer, and I think fans of into infinity will like this one. Feel free to leave some feedback, thanks!
Great Beat!
I love the beat and i am glad some poeple still use guitatar but maybe can you not put vocals on this copy i like it the way it is BUT i am shure you have a great voice :D
Meh...
I really don't like that guitar thing at 0:24 to 0:37 etc. . It really sounds like something my 5 year old sister could have come up with...
And maybe it's my own taste but I wouldn't have found it interesting at all even with lyrics until around 1:39 where something actually happened. But then you killed it with lots of repetition.
Benjerama responds:
Sounds like you have a talented sister! In all seriousness though I do agree to some extent; this was made a year back just as a jam session, it's not really finished at the moment and I'm not sure when it will be. The hook is very simple but it's also very catchy which is why I used it (It's just way too thin as someone mentioned before). As far as the repetition goes, I was listening to a lot of qotsa at the time and that influenced this alot, which might not be your thing and that's fine. But I don't really think anything was killed in this demo, besides a few guitar strings :)
Overall good, but a little lacking.
The main riff you got going there is great, it's got some real weight to it. The rest of the song needs work though. First off, I suggest turning down your distortion on the rhythm guitar, it's a little much. Your lead guitar sounds really wimpy, once again take some of the feedback from your rhythm and put it on the lead. Your rhythm guitar and bass are playing the same thing, this is lazy song writing and can bore your audience. It is okay to have the rhythm just ride the roots for the song, but the bass should be doing something else, try making an actual bass line that moves around the chords a little more instead of playing just the roots. Your drums sound fake as hell, that just bugs me, if your using real drums record them better, if not, get real drums. Overall I'd say this song is a good effort, I'd just like to see a little more in it. Fix the drums and bass, and get your guitars balanced and you'll have a great tune.
Sweet
I can't wait to see what this would be like with vocals!
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- 2 min 32 sec
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