Interesting bass kick thingie...I couldnt quite figure out how you did that. Other elements of the piece seemed pretty elementary, I think in a couple of months you will learn to get a more professional sound (i dont have it) I didnt like how you ended with the kicks... :/ And the melody seemed to go way louder about half through the piece or something. Anyways check out my music if you get a chance. Thanks
yeah it was kina supposed to be elementary I'm using it to teach my class how to make electronic music. but yeah I didn't like thee kicks at the end too, it just needed to get done for school. but thanks for the review!! :D I will go back and fine tune it for a final draft.