Everything screams out EPIC! But you seem held back my something...
By the way totally loved the intro 00:00-00:26 for some reson I keep seeing this female opera singer sing the casual notes like in one of Beethoven hope I spelt that correctly. Anyways let's start.
I find absolutely no problem with the intro however I am expecting some sort of agitated feeling after that. You have to push this one has epic potential. On the attack. (0:29) Then you put this stop slow feeling into the song. I can see the appeal but this song needs more attack on the main rhythm! 0:29-0:59 I particularly like the uplifting feeling you get from this song at the main rhythm. If you can keep that feeling and have a more agitated rhythm then you my friend had achieved epic.
1:00-1:28 wow this screams deep techno club beats. Well you get my point I don't think this needs too much explaining.
1:29 introduce a trace lead. I think you know were I'm going with this but that's just the way I see this song as being. Super cool that is!
1:39 bring back the voices. Push it!
1:44 bring back the "deep techno club beats"
Some problem with the main rhythm 1:58-2:27
Bring back the deep techno club beats. 2:28-3:27. On a side note. 2:40 bring back the trace lead. 2:59 Bring back the female opera singer. Remember build up. 3:27 stop all of that.
And there you have it!
P.S. Nice ending man!
well put togather.
its very relaxing,i must admit i enjoyed it.
i liked the intro too.
keep it up!
Thanks! I'm glad you like it :)
Now OMG AMAZGING!
But pretty good, Well structured and calm.