Alright so nice start up to this one, bringing in some interesting audio that makes for an overall decent listen to so nice job there. I like that this was more of a song and the drums are really nice, wouldnt mind more of some variaty though. Alright for the most of this it was ok, And a track like this is always pleasent but you still never know what you are getting.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So like I said there are some options for some improvments just here or there, and I have gone and suggested a few here and hope they can help and hope you have the time to improve on this, because it will be well worth the effort, regardless of what you do good stuff indeed. hope you work on some things. More drums more mix of variaty would be cool.
Keep it like it is. It's a nice beat. :) Name really fits in too, nice work!
leave it be
No u don't need a melody for this one. leave it the way it is.
Its almost like "in my white tee"
you should put some strings or flutes maybe even some vocals ya know sumptin simple but its tight
not too bad, your getting better, but its the same thing out the whole thing, hit me up on aim (avont29) and i can help you out
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.