The song is good
In balance the very low voices sound awesome but they push away some of the brightness of the higher synth sounds.
Speaking of those you might want to phase them and pan them from left to right in bit more frantic way than you do with the large ambient synth sound
Please return the favor on my new Country and Western Song: Saloon Brawl
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.