At least that's what I'm getting from this. Excellent stuff.
I agree with below
The bass was absolutly perfect.
Try to get a better melody out of your head :D
The bass is really really really good!! The beat is great.
Wait the melody at around 2:12 is very good indeed.
Try to get that sooner. Just my opinion...
Please return the favor on my new songs: Waiting for the worst and an older one: Airport Goodbye
...I like it, and I like how you used it.
the other instruments are nice too.
the melo was nice too and the lead and the bass where playing together nicely!
When youre bored, Check out my dance song "The Sunlight".
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.