Epic Battle Music!!!
I can see what your saying about it being destroyer of worlds, but i only get the picture because your telling me of it. If you want your song to really emphasise such, you need to use your dynamics in a way that would show such. Your song needs to go somewhere. So I'd start off at a piano or Metsopiano. Crescendo towards a fortissimo, and I love your fade at the end showing that he is leaving. Great Job. Keep it up!
Thanks for the suggestions and kind words! Well, to be honest, I've never gotten the same image twice when I pass my music along to other people, so everyone is entitled to their own opinion and interpretation of a song. I guess it's hard when you listen to an instrumental piece to actually know what the author was thinking, and I must admit that I do leave in quite a bit of "mystery", so to speak. :)