I like it :D
It was all pretty good until the guitar came in. It was loud and annoying. Besides this one problem I really liked the rest of the song. I loved it around 4:30 and onward. It started to get really intense. Your music inspires me and i really hope you continue to make more.
Hey I'm back! I truly like the fact that you went crazy on this tone! Just love this song. I have some problems with it but we will cover that in the review.
Ok let's start!
00:02-00:04 I don't think that works. Try and go for a hallow midlevel feeling there.
Till 00:14 the song seems to jumpy and then everything goes black... if you make some sort of sad emotion there should be no problem there.
Let's move on.
Seriously I am loving the build up on this song after 00:14! Outstand! Love everything although there is that one problem with over powering levels on one instrument. The feeling I'm getting is something out of a movie score. Something important is happening with the hero. Ever seen Eragon? Anyway love this song. 00:55-2:16
2:17-2:44 seriously that guitar is way to over powering! Work the levels. My suggestion is to add more background support for the song at that part maybe more of that church bell band? Like one every 20sec should do. Or maybe more voices in the background? Or add a little bit of the drums that comes after this part. The transition is way to sudden totally add some transition on the drums to that next part of the song.
2:45-3:38 Outstanding! Again the lead is to over powering try and even out the sound with everything ells. Note: a good idea it to stop the song there for about 2sec and then a reversed top hat sound comes in and then back to the song.(the very start of 3:39)
3:40-4:06 there is definitely too much distortion on that guitar! Make it smoover sounding and a harmonic guitar to the leading guitar. Put the levels on both guitars down way to over powering. Remember it's the little details to make things work best. Same notes by the way.
4:06-4:07 again you need a transition on the drums that come in after. It's too sudden.
This part of the song works perfectly! Nice work! 4:07-5:00. love it! I honestly don't think you need that much of a leap on the song at 5:01. Just finish in nice and slow.
On second thought this works. Work on the levels of the guitars and put them down and start fade out at 5:28.
That's it hope it helps you.
Thanks for the review!
I would fix it up but, I renamed the file and then it disappeared... maybe I'll be able to see it If I re-install the program.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.