I think you could add one more flute on the flute melody after a few time. Maybe some cymbals if you want it more epic :P. You could put another melody into it. Your song would last longer and be even more interesting. Your song is great, I like it.
yeah, sure! anything is possible with this song!
thank you for commenting, next time i get a chance to work on it, i'll take these into consideration!
not bad :)
You could do some more work into it. I prefer adding percussion instruments. That is only my liking but overall this has potential.
thank you for commenting! i will add percussion eventually, but i had only done about an hours work on it!
percussion... hmmm... that is a lot harder, because all of it is done through a midi keyboard, and not a good one either. i think i'll need to brush up on it, but thats a perfectly good point!
whats your opinion on my other song, life as it were?
Very nice start =]
Promising, keep it up. It could use more instruments and have a bit more different kind of parts, if you know what I mean =]
thank you for your comment! i hope to add more instruments to it eventually!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.