I really like the original way the song goes along with, and the happy feeling also adds some points here. But i think there could be quite more bashing into the effects, at some times, it gets a little empty, but not much.
Else i would just say, nicely done. :)
4/4 - 7/10
Yes it is a bit empty sometimes, largely due to me fucking up the length (it was meant to be 2 minutes long) but at the same time I wanted it to be relaxing instead of hectic, so I tried to soften it up a bit. (probably a bit too much)
I could've gone into the effects more buuut... Iunno, I often get carried away, I think I focussed too hard on making it simple which is paradoxical to the song itself considering how random it is.
Thanks for your crit man :)
I'm not sure whether the tone is meant to sound of at times but still this song is quite relaxing and kinda quirky at the same time
There are also some parts that sound out of time and some that don't really fit but they didn't make the song unbearable overall I quite enjoyed.
Thanks very much man :).
I took a lot of inspiration from, and pardon me if i get the genre or point wrong, math metal, or any genre that successfully blends different moods, instrument sets and time signatures to create a constantly evolving song. I attempted something along these lines. You're right, some tones do not compliment each other unfortunately, but it's all I could do in the time provided, and sleep deprivation makes anything perfect sometimes :D
(I'll prolly end up removing the ska-tar near the end)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.