Some people have suggested I add more to this loop, and so I have. Although getting this far, I want to go farther, and maybe turn this into a piece of its own. A full song I mean.
Please C&C, so I may improve this even more.
Thanks
SydRic
Not too bad!
I think you could have used a better orchestral instrument. It sounds like all of the instruments are out of tune. I know that's not your fault, though!
Overall, this is very good! I have to say, if the instruments were fixed (and you didn't have it accidentally set to the classic rock genre) this would be MUCH better!
Keep up the good work!
Thank you very much for your review. Excuse me for being really late with a reply, but I don't think i was ever notified of your comment. I'll try a different program for the orchestral instruments.
I agree that they sound out of tune.
-Sydric
Yeah son.
I like how you did this one. When your doing this what are you really going for? Like what kind of tone? Cuz both your parts sound differnt. Key is the same it looks like but they sound a lot differnt. It sounds like you added a bag pipe to this. the main melody with the trumpet and bagpipe i guess lol actually go perfectly with your other loop. sort of. Try layering the main melody you got here and putting it in your other loop. it fits. if you going to make a full song. i say use the melody you got from here and use the power chords you got from the other song. They fit pretty well. The drums sound all good on both tracks. Now you just gotta find a way to make both pieces flow together into one. good job on this.
Thanks for showing up for this. :)
Im kind of edging for a victorious theme. Very upbeat and strong. An enormous battle that has just been won. With a flavor of Metal in the back, but the melody and harmony on the Classic side which leads this song.
I want to get some strings in this, but there's so many different tracks already that it would be hard to here them.
There's 1 instrument in this that is dischords, thats likely the part that sounds very different, although I want to change the Lead guitar that shreds for the first part of the song. To what? I dont know yet, ill try some things. There's no bagpipes in this, the lower sounding is a either trombone or trumpet essemble.
I also put the Flange on the Dischorded guitar. As well as the cymbal crashes.
thanks for some more ideas. Your rating is appreciated.
-Sydric
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
SydRic 
