Well,

I generally am not into slow and ambient as much as something flashy, but this is awesome.

hmmm

very sad indeed, but you could probably aslo call it happy in some ways, i mean im just imagining it in a love scene of a flash, and that could work, it is sad yet happy, and happy yet sad, if you get what i mean. AHH another fade out... way to short dude.

Eh...

Not bad, truly. Personally, I would express "sleep" with a bunch of disjointed but pleasing ideas, not just one that grows and becomes more complex. But that's just me.

This is an acceptable A part, but it needs at least one other section to set it off.

You're plenty good enough at variation, you need much longer themes.

Yeah...

Good harmonies/chords, good song altogether. DesTroy_Kid is right, though. This song belongs in Runescape!

But, it is a little repetetive... a trap most artists fall into, including myself. It would be great if you used more realistic instruments. I don't know what program you use, but I'd grab some VST effects and instruments to play around with. They're much better than regular .WAV or .AIFF samples (but not for drums! VSTs aren't all that great for Drumloops or hits).

Good work, in all.

well is kinda nice.....

is kinda remind me the online game (runescape)
u should make a bit like (add some violin player or mayb some drum...is kinda cool u know?)

well is up to u man!,GOOD LUCK MAN!!!!