The snare drum really gives it the most epic "marching" and everything was great until 3:15. Then it began to sound a bit experimental with the instruments. I would reccomend removing the drums at that point. It sounds to much as though it might bust out into a rock solo anthem song or something and kills that legendary power feel.
Well, I did experiment quite a bit with this one, so I'm not surprised. I wanted to push some of my previous limits, and it seems like I did, since someone reacted. I guess, however, that we have different tastes in some ways.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.