MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!
It's a great tune man, I can see a lot of potential for making it a badass tune. First and foremost though, don't start the solo with really badass sweeps unless the rest of your solo can live up to it, which it didn't. The rips and runs you were doing at the end, harmonically, were interesting but didn't go anywhere. You should have had a more creative ending; A bend up would have sufficed even, but a song like this just screams for more. I LOVED the (pre?) chorus, the riff with the 80's like vibe. It makes me want to grab my flying V and do a crazy wanky solo. MY final pointer is on the solo again; if you fix the structure of the chords you're sweeping over, you're going to have a much more solid solo. I'm giving you a five because I know this song has some serious balls, but because the song just screams for more.
i should of continued the solo more. Mayn...eh. Well i don't see my self reconstructing this song. But on my next song, i'll make sure to keep your comments in mind. thanks for commenting. OH and you should really start recording your own songs, I really wanna hear your work.