Pretty nice for a first try.
The vocals fit the song very good.The bass melody is really nice but the synth itself need alot of tweaking.First off all EQ it properly so its a bass (Not a sub bass and a bass in one) and maybe add a tiny bit of reverb on it.And as i mentioned you need a sub bass to bring out the power of the main bassline itself.
As for the drums and perc, i think the kick is pretty nice but when you create your sub bass it will affect it (its a bit low) and you should probably EQ or change it a bit.
The clap is nice too but i think it would be good if you add another one, shorter and maybe a bit harder with reduced reverb.And your hats are lacking the very reverb the clap has.
Overall a nice track indeed.Just need some tweaking.Good job !
8/10 5/5 :)
Thankyou :) Nice imput and I'm still learning but I will give your suggestions a go.
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