Okay... YOU FUCKIN' SUCK I HOPE YOU DIE CHOKE ON A DICK!!!!
Now in all seriousness, this is not a bad piece of music. It's a little short and could use a little extra "ear candy". But all in all, it's a pretty good start of something.
Harshly i will rate this...
Bass is not repetitive.
Synths are good and add to the song.
bass is too quiet
drums are generic
needs some vocal clips
Missing essential parts such as breakdown and drop
I usually dont review this harshly but u told me to.
As for the vocals just use the preset ones from FL and say something stupid like "I need to buy toilet paper" If its funny it should get people hooked.
i hope this helped.
ill make sure and sing a lot for you next time i make a song bro.