To be honest, everything should be improved...
i ant to kill babies
how does this not have a perfect zero?
Sorry to say this to you, but I would barely call this music, it's a 27 seconds long melody of too highly pitched saxophone tones and it sounds like it was made in 10 minutes using a single standard tone that came with some kind of mediocre music program. There's no rythm, no 'flow', and since you only use one tone for 27 seconds there's barely enough to give semi-constructive criticism about.
Sorry if I sound harsh, but what i'm trying to say is that it's hard to tell you 'what to improve' since this could barely be called something.
P.S. I hope this is either W.I.P or that you spend atleast an hour on a song, after familiarizing yourself with your audio program, before you post it.
i think most ppl are expecting some kind of beat or rythm to kick in and therefore only vote 0 because they don't see the track in the same way as you.
even i expected to hear something more but i guess it's WIP?