Kind of funny how much better the battles (and MCs) have gotten on Newgrounds these past few years. I'm definitely going to have to give this one to Cynic. The 'abilities/kill mcs/ill as me/willingly' multi was pretty clever and referencing 8track and Murdaa was a pretty nice flip too.
Exceptid's finisher was pretty dope but I don't see how he won this.
What a great battle!
Winner of Lyrics: Gloine
Winner of Rhythm: Gloine
Winner of BURN: Exceptid but only NARROWLY
Overall winner: Gloine
when i first heard the beat my emotion started as ......well...i've heard better. and then Exc BURST in like he was angry and i was like oh shit D:!!!!
im pretty sure most people listenin to the NGHH are 100% positive that the reason why exceptid made it to the finals , is cuz when he raps he raps like hes angry. Just like eminem . _ . . And that one characteristic gives Exc a HUGE advantage in the votes. if u agree with this mark this comment as useful . _ .
It is pretty cool I guess
The intro with gun fire was a bit interesting I suppose but I came to hear a cool beat actually. After about twenty seconds I get my wish.
The lyrics are pretty nice as well. Very harsh but he sounds like he has a good future in the record industry if you puts that much soul into every song he does as well.
The back beat, drums, ghost feel, bells, and bass line were all pretty good. This is actually a very nice versus song so great work here.
Overall, a good versus song but I really have no idea which person was better as they were both that good. D:
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Needs some work.
When I first found out that it was going to be a rap, I got a little worried. But, it turned out pretty good.
Rhythm: The beat going while you guys were rapping was pretty solid, but a little too overpowering. I couldn't hear some of the bars because the music was so loud. It's a very simple, very effective fix. Turn it down a little. :]
Rapper 1: Drink some more water before you start rapping, it will take away that spitty sound people are talking about. If you are dehydrated when you start rapping the saliva will get all hung up in your mouth.
Rapper 2: Great job, very clean. Not much to say about yours. Impressed. Obvious winner.
Timing: Near the beginning there was some timing issues, it didn't really lock in with the beat.
Overall: It's a very good run, there is just some little things that will help tremendously.
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.